6级英语作文求高手修改和大概分数
Ordinarily, purchasing a train ticket is very easy .But when it comes to the Spring Festival, there is no more difficult than buying a ticket. In order to avoid someone who hoards tickets and then resells tickets in a high price, the real-name train ticket purchase system is launched. A multitude of people agree with such idea.
Firstly, it can reform the situation that tickets are hoarded. It's no doubt that such measure makes publics easier to buy train tickets during the Spring Festival. Secondly, in pursuance of the real-name train ticket purchase system prevents the people who resell train tickets in a high price. Every coin has two sides. This reform also has weak point. An ID card in the train ticket contains a lot of personal information which is very dangerous if you lose the ticket.
From my perspective, I firmly support that the launch of the real-name train ticket purchase system do more good than harm.
帮我批改下英语作文，按六级的标准
Drink Driving has been one of the most risky factors to public safety. Every effort should be applied to bring such incidence to the end. We share the responsibility with the authority to fight it.
First, more rigorous law should be enacted to punish those offenders to the maximum. Drink driving brakes laws! Second, law enforcement should carry the most advanced equipment to promptly check the Blood Alcohol Content (BAC) in the suspects. Last but not the least, we, the average citizen, should keep safety in mind all the time. We should watch around and act out in case we catch someone is going to do this dangerous behavior.
In my opinion, it is everybody’s responsibility to promote traffic safety. Increased awareness of traffic safety issues will help to bring a more safe community.
